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The City, the City

An experimental poem

By Annie KapurPublished 8 months ago β€’ 1 min read
The City, the City
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Pale grey overcast and fractions of clouds

whimper as you vomit on the steps of

Saint Paul's Cathedral.

Resign here,

don't move forward and

yet you still exhale:

How did I get here?

Here the harpies nest.

They scream like banshees into the night.

And you,

wailing on your knees

- trapped by the stars -

between heaven and earth,

you begin to pray away the city.

Modern apocalypse please, you

squirm, stop your towers of Babel from...

but nobody hears you.

Clutch the dreadful sand and stone,

wipe it clean from the floor

- and curse the trees that cease to be -

break the twigs and listen...

no, really listen...

you can just about hear the wind

- crack -

through the maze of high rises.

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  • angela hepworth8 months ago

    This legitimately gave me a chill. I’m dead serious; I felt like I was there.

  • Tim Carmichael8 months ago

    I detect T.S. Eliot writing style in your poetry. Great job, and never say you can't write poems because you do it so well.

  • Jay Kantor8 months ago

    Ak - You do tell the best SpitUp & Vomit Tales..! Jk

  • Paul Stewart8 months ago

    Annie, this is another great piece of experimental poetry. I love how evocative it is and how your descriptions and the emotions, the action puts me right there. Amidst the madness! Well done, lassie!

  • Daniel Miller8 months ago

    This description is intense! The imagery of vomiting on the cathedral steps and the harpies screaming is really vivid. It makes me wonder what led to this "modern apocalypse" scenario you've painted. How do you think our actions today could potentially lead to such a desperate situation? Also, the idea of praying away the city while being trapped between heaven and earth is thought-provoking. What do you think that says about the character's state of mind?

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