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The Green Man
The Green Man He watched the woods Leaves in his beard Eyes deep with age Calm in his breath Branches curled round him
By Marie381Uk 3 months ago in Poets
Dark Light
Dark Light Dark light calling Shadows leaning in Your breath near mine Heat rising slow You teased the dark Pulled me closer
By Marie381Uk 3 months ago in Poets
1 Year Later - I've Made It, No You Have - No I Have , No You, Truly You
Okay, you know what " I" am going to say right, that without, you, it couldn't have been possible! Without the things you have done, life isn't the way it was, and I will just have to say - trust and believe.
By 365poetry3 months ago in Poets
Turning Cold
Turning Cold The air feels thinner in the early light, a quiet nip brushing along my hands, I breathe out and watch the mist rise,
By Marie381Uk 3 months ago in Poets
Remembrance Day
Remembrance Day Guns tore the air, yet they crawled on, souls bruised by thunder, faces set like stone. Mud clutched their boots,
By Marie381Uk 3 months ago in Poets
The Dark Man in the Alley
The Dark Man in the Alley The alley held a breathless chill, a stillness wrapped around the bricks, and in the corner stood a shape,
By Marie381Uk 3 months ago in Poets
My Poetry, My opinion and a Kalashnikov!
This December the book I have been writing, un-writing, swearing at and crying at finally gets published properly. I have tried self publishing with very little success or skill. A move which should have been thought out much, much better. The result was poor. Now the renouned publisher 'Austin Macauley' have taken my book and turned it into something to be very proud of, in my opinion. Yes, I did pay for the service but the skill they have put into the design of my work is great.
By David Aleman3 months ago in Poets
Leave the Gleanings
Leave the Gleanings -Of Your Harvest- Community matters. Think of the difference in fervently scavenging for food in scarcity, versus knowing where to go to have just what you need.
By Heather Kaspar3 months ago in Poets
A Night I Couldn’t Cry
A Night I Couldn’t Cry There was a night the tears stayed still, a night my heart refused to break, though the pain was sharp and deep,
By Marie381Uk 3 months ago in Poets
The Quiet Behind My Eyes
The Quiet Behind My Eyes The world grows heavy when I think, a weight that settles in my mind, shadows move behind my eyes,
By Marie381Uk 3 months ago in Poets
The Candle’s Second Life
The Candle’s Second Life In darkness, something tried to breathe, A flame reborn from wax beneath. The blood had dried, the pain had slept,
By Marie381Uk 3 months ago in Poets
I Broke Up With The Moon. Runner-Up in Letters to the Moon Challenge.
A recent text exchange between me and the moon Hey. Oh, hey Derek, nice to know you're alive. Don't be like that. Like what? You ghosted me.
By John R. Godwin3 months ago in Poets