Summer Bliss 💦
Falling in love with an image is sometimes the First step toward a Downfall...
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Diving into a Pool of Love...
I jumped head first,
Using my eyes and not my mind.
Proceeding Toward the deep limitation,
unsure if I'll survive...
Along the Adventures be sure to take satisfaction in the conveyance.
Maybe that's where the lesson resides...
The surface is Cool and Blue
But inside could be Fun and Profound...
-The Love Pool 💖🏊
Never let your Love Drown-
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I too agree ‘Maybe that's where the lesson resides... The surface is Cool and Blue.’ The surface or within the ‘Sami and vai.’ Pauline 🌸
The love pool is full of so many emotions and trials. Just jump in and hope the hearts do the rest. It is a free for all in there.
congrats on Top Story!!
Oh, and congrats on Top Story!! 😍😍😍
Beautiful poem with divine rhymes and wonderful metaphor :) Your work always speaks to me, my friend! Plus, I love the summer :)
Perfect metaphor. I remember summer love 💖
Never let your love drown. I love this line so much. Great stuff ❤️
SO happy you got the Top Story status for this! It's WELL deserved! ;)
"Using my eyes and not my mind"...so much to that line. A relatable piece in many ways. Wonderful work!! Congratulations on Top Story!!
Great lesson with fantastic parallels! Beautiful job, Lonzo! Congrats on top story!
YAY!🎉💃🏽 Congrats on your TOP STORY! 😁
Deep love is complex, and often, one person loves more than the other. Great poem!
Typically, our eyes provide that first impression. It usually takes a pretty deep dive into that pool for the mind to overcome it.
Definitely some words of wisdom that could only come from personal experience. I'm all about wallking (not falling) into love with eyes wide open from here on out. Congratulations on Top Story!
Wonderful, Lonzo! Congratulations on the Top Story!
Yay. Congrats on the TS
Congratulations on your top story😁🌈💓yay
💦💦💦 Congrats !!! 🎉💖
Congratulations on Top Story! 👏🎉👏🚀
Congrats, wonderful and deserving Top Story!
Wonderful words
Awww, this was so wonderful!
Let your love shine and never let it drown!!! 🌟🌊💕
Lovely!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕
Love this especially using your eyes and not ur mind to dive into your love pool , head first Brilliant work ♥️