Strawberry, dark, bright blue sea
Loud / Quiet

beneath your shining, piercing tone
Your rainstorm brewing,
Your thunder stewing
there is so much loud
In you, it cascades out, slowly, painfully
Built up
In waves that send my pulse racing
And alive,
It keeps neurons on fire,
It sends the strawberries patches
That scuttle along the well of your mind
Like little bits of green and red,
To fall into that quiet chasm
dark,
Quiet,
no light.
And I know it’s there,
Your loud music
That’s why I wait until the end.
It’s sounds like Beethoven,
But feels like
Mozart.
I see your hurricane 🌀
Hit
Then pass
And then
It’s all
Bright, deep, calm
Blue sea.
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Beautiful!
Always love your words sis