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Still Stuck on Romeo

You can feel my heart's devotional Battle between belonging and wanting to be...

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Still Stuck on Romeo
Photo by 🐣 Luca Iaconelli 🦊 on Unsplash

The smooth chill in his voice

Liquefied my Nervous system...

His Tinge existed delicate and Compelling.

I escaped the toxic traits of Hungover agony, but I returned to set free my emotions...

I was Enchanted by his Lovemaking.

Why is Love so addictive?

I coveted for him to kiss me with Pride a Thousand Times...
At least he Held out 69.

I stored some tenderness in a Jar in an attempt to save it for him...

He wasn't perfect but he was the best for me.

I love Him even in my Dreams...

Although he may hurt me,

I still remembered his dialogues of pity...

And that holds me at Bay.

Dear Romeo,

I'm Forgiving him for not being you.

I should have never answered your questions, last week when I saw you.

Maybe we still think of each other,

While being wrapped in our lover's arms.

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

“ Public Diary, of an Urban Poet

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  • noor3 years ago

    lovely LONzo

  • such an incredible talent

  • Kristen Balyeat3 years ago

    Ooohhhhh- I L O V E this one, Lonzo! “Liquefied my Nervous system...“ oh my goodness, this line gave me all the feels!!! 💫💞

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Lonzo! Your poems are divine. 😍 Some of my favorite lines: "Liquefied my Nervous system..." 😍😍😍 "I stored some tenderness in a Jar..." 🤗🤗🤗🤗 LOVE!!

  • Robbie Cheadle3 years ago

    Beautiful and heartfelt writing.

  • Idealizations of the past hinder our celebrations in the present as well as hopes for the future.

  • Moe Radosevich3 years ago

    Great work Lonzo 😊😊

  • Mariann Carroll3 years ago

    Magnificent series, look forward to reading some more 🥰

  • I so just want to steal all of your subtitles; they are fire. This line right here is superb: "He wasn't perfect but he was the best for me."

  • Roy Stevens3 years ago

    Wait, I just had this crazy notion that your 'antagonist's' real name actually is Romeo... Can't be... can it?

  • Tiffany Gordon3 years ago

    Fabulous writing! Go little bro Go!

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