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Still in love with Romeo

Moving forward with someone else and Everything Reminds You of the Haunted Past...

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 3 years ago β€’ Updated 3 years ago β€’ 1 min read
Still in love with Romeo
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He offered his hand,

And asked if I’d like to dance...

I drank up my champagne,

And asked if the offer still stands.

He held me close to his chest, and

I wavered in his arms.

Suddenly I inhaled and exhaled the scent of someone else...
I didn't know what was happening, so I said I had to go to the restroom...

I splashed my face with water,

And his facade greeted me in the mirror.

I closed my eyes and he appeared in my mind...

I guess it is time to resign from this party.

Thinking out loud πŸ’­

I can't see how you haunt me with so much beauty.

Thinking out loud πŸ’­

Yes, I'm still in love with you and you're still in love with me...

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

β€œ Public Diary, of an Urban Poet

πŸŽ‰I am an Actor, Model, Writer, and Entrepreneur β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ™

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  • Leslie Writes3 years ago

    Love it. I think these crazy kids just might make it after all πŸ’–

  • This Romeo series is just so emotional! I love it so much!

  • Loryne Andawey3 years ago

    Oh. I'm sure I'll cry if this turns into a novel. Beautifully done β€πŸ’”πŸ’

  • Jess Boyes3 years ago

    You got me right in the heart. Beautifully written ❀️

  • noor3 years ago

    beautiful!

  • Tiffany Gordon3 years ago

    gorgeous work Handsome Zo!!!!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Brilliant!!!πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’•

  • Beautifully expressed.

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    sadly beautiful. Well done.

  • "Romeo, O Romeo. Wherefore art thou, Romeo?" Stuck in your mind. I thought that was obvious.

  • Mariann Carroll3 years ago

    I can wait to see how Romeo’s love be reciprocated the way he deserve πŸ₯°

  • Roy Stevens3 years ago

    You are just so good at capturing the honest pain (and joy). It's a true gift and you share it with all of us, thanks β—β•β—πŸŽπŸŽˆ

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