Romeo is Stuck on me…
When it stands Broken don't hang around because he desires you to stay, solely allow your intuition to guide you through...
He Deprives me of My Satisfaction,
And he Muffles My Heart...
I Bloom when he is comparable.
He advised me to be more than happy...
He says that I am his magic...
I uttered to him...
I know I should have to withstand, But you just look so Irresistibly...
I was Apprising him to take off, but I didn't want him to leave...
How do we have a Heart to Heart without splitting,
Into sympathy?
I left my Love on the dresser,
When you undressed me...
Currently Laying in bed,
Dreaming a Pillow talk with you...
Something about that evening,
The Universe witnessed our first kiss...
I think it was February or March...
You walked right into my heart...
We got Tangled up, surfing deviation,
In a world full of curiosity...
But the Moral of the story
You left me with scars...
Emotions spilled, and faded
On The Carpet...
You Broke my Heart while Collecting
It unduly
And I couldn't stop it 🚫
You would always be a part of me-
Those were the last words you said to me...
Maybe the lyrics from Mariah’s
Song or perhaps it stood because you
Knew that,
Our Love was Gone...
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Comments (17)
great!
Oh, sad day! Beautifully done, Lonzo!
I am really enjoying this Romeo series. I wish it had worked out, but life is often not so simple. <3
Aw always, you've deeply moved me with your word here. So emotional and wonderful, Lonzo! 🤗❤️
It can be difficult to let go of someone even when they have caused us pain.
Fabulous work!
I found it so interesting that you used the single word "apart" (which means "to be separated") instead of the two, "a part" (which suggests assimilation). Intentional or Freudian? I'm not sure.
This is a beautiful piece 🔥👌
Very true and raw emotions running through your words…😢
Broken promises result in broken heart. This was so sad 🥺
Shattered & heartbreaking!! Left some love!!!💖💖💕
Great poem! 💜
Reflective and emotionally taxing adventure of love and loss.
beautiful, yet sad. Well done.
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Oh..., I'm hoping this is mostly fictional but if it's factual then I feel for you Lonzo! 💔💓❣
Very sad. Is this a poetry series , awesome 👍🥰