I watch you dance with
bright stars in stygian skies
glowing amidst voids
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J. R. Lowe
By day, I'm a PhD student, by night.... I'm still a PhD student, but sometimes I procrastinate by writing on Vocal. Based in Australia.
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Comments (4)
I watch you dance with bright stars. - Beautiful Haiku!!!
aglow amidst voids ahh I love it.
Oooooo this is gooood. Two stars amidst voids ... what a fab metaphor.
Wonderful!!!