Solid Silver Water
For The Vocal "Frosted Verse" Challenge
Introduction
I have decided to do this poem as a rhyming acrostic with a constant syllable count.
The music is "The Frost Is Over" by The Chieftains
Solid Silent Water
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First Frost Of The Coming Winter
Rime On Leaves And Branches Appears
Over Time Silver Icicles Form
See Them Announce The Coming Storm
This Winter Frost Comes, And Then Snow
Early Frosted Icicle Show
Day By Day Winter Frost Does Draw
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Views Of Frost That Hangs From Branches
Each Forest Tree With Frost Dances
Rain Falls On Trees Frost Advances
Solid Silver Water Lances
Each Icicle Frosting Branches
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Comments (7)
Beautiful
Gorgeous, this actually got me feeling a little bit Christmassy!
As always, lovely to imagine and fun to read.
Good flow and fun
I especially loved how you made it rhyme so brilliantly!
Great work and makes me homesick for a good old winter with snow, ice and frosted everything.
It's beautiful Mike! I feel winter is a time to look forward to now.