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Sinking

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By Sid Aaron HirjiPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Sinking
Photo by Tamanna Rumee on Unsplash

This sucks when it happens to us all,

That cookie slips from fingers,

The oreo comes sinking down,

When we dip in the milk,

Creamy drowning in cream,

There goes my dream

Cookie that

Fell in

Milk.

For Fun

About the Creator

Sid Aaron Hirji

Canadian born man who finds literature and science equally fascinating. Trauma bleeds through generations, words heal the hidden scars.

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  • Antoni De'Leonabout a year ago

    Yes. Now get a new cookie and dip carefully, for each cookie deserves a second chance. Enjoy it all Sid, live free and unencumbered.

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Fantastic and fun!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    This analogy of milk, cookie and dreams is wonderful Sid. Such truth in a small poem.

  • I loveeeeeeeeee this concept of break up and it truly hurts too when this happens!

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Excellent and yummy

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Ah, we've all been there! Really does suck!

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