Breakup
Nonet Challenge
By Sid Aaron HirjiPublished 2 years ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Claire Kelly on Unsplash
You left me in the blink of an eye,
And I just don't understand why,
I did nothing wrong to you.
My skin feels cold to touch,
I miss you so much,
Yet you left me
Hanging down
Pretty
Dead.
About the Creator
Sid Aaron Hirji
Canadian born man who finds literature and science equally fascinating. Trauma bleeds through generations, words heal the hidden scars.
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Comments (8)
Loss is always heavy for the one who loves.
I like the way that you chose an image of a flower with its head hanging and then the way your last lines mirror that. Nice.
Great imagery for this one, well done 😁
The poem is great. But Does your first line have ten syllables, is it supposed to be nine. Do you need to recount or maybe I am getting it wrong. I have not done any, so check again.
Sadly, this happens wayyyy to often. Loved your poem!
Wow. Beautiful
A very heartfelt poem.
Powerful heartbreaking entry!!! Love it!!!❤️❤️💕