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Smile at me like your eyes remember.
Recall the scents of past Decembers.
Hold my hand, just a little while.
Sing to me those old lullabies,
fore the taste of your kiss bids me goodbye.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (28)
This is so sweetly poignant π₯Ή.
i love this
The opening two lines instantly reminds me of that song "Try To Remember", and I like the wistful, loving note this poem has:)
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Cathy When reading I pondered that unless made explicit by you the context and personal meaning are βunkown.β. And of course that matters not ~ I felt a deep and beloved connection to your poem. How to choose a line that most speaks to me? βSmile at me like your eyes remember.β Pauline πΈ
So, so gorgeous and heartfelt, my friend <3
Every line is gorgeous! I do hope this one places.
Stunning and wonderfully wistful! Such a heartbreaking first lineβ¦
Such a lovely and haunting poem. Well done.
There is such softness here Cathy. π₯° *sighs*
Very poignant and bittersweet as well. mice work! βΊοΈ
Beautiful, bittersweet goodbye. You are an exceptional poet and a master of the form, Cathy! I love it!
Oh. Heartbreaking. Gosh - this one got to me today.
This was so poignantly beautiful. I especially loved your second line!
This is gorgeous!π
Beautiful and heartbreaking all in one breath! Nicely done Cathy!!
Brilliant!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπ
Lovely
Aww, just so bittersweet and lovely!!!
So sad and lovely
So beautiful! And lovely image too!
Nailed it!
Every time! Just grabbing those heartstrings and giving them a good old tug. Every time!
Hi-Ch ~ Well that really put me to sleep ~ Nah! Funny: I'm told that my 'Llama & Koala' poem is so long that kids fall asleep after the 1st paragraph..! - Sleep Tight - j.bud.in.l.a.
What a wonderful goodbye! Well done, my friend!