Silentium,
In itself
Lies dormant.
Enduring the discomfort
Nurturing the moments
Capturing time
Enticing others to break it.
About the Creator
JBaz
I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.
I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.
Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
A Dart at Dusk
Seconds ago, the sullen sun set on the two of us… my exuberant furry companion and me. A fresh breeze embraces us, delivering welcome relief from the day’s oppressive heat. His typical stumbling and staggering along — apace with a sloth — has turned into trip-trapping, high-stepping, almost skipping along.
By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶about 19 hours ago in Petlife
Comments (17)
Profound and perfectly presented! (alliteration unintentional.)
Fantastic acrostic, Jbaz. I especially liked that last line, very fitting
That's a strong opening line/word!
Silentium? New word for me. Lovely wording of the poem.
Well-wrought! Brief and elegent!
Excellent acrostic ✅… multifaceted Silence! “Capturing time” etc.
That last line set off a number of memories for me.
I love how this feels like a silence is almost taunting the reading!! That line "Enduring the discomfort" is everything! Well done Jason!!
The last line has such a lingering effect! Great acrostic, JBaz!
Fabulous!!!!
I believe Silence can be utilized in that way, excellent work 👍🏽👍🏽
This was so gorgeous! Loved your wonderful Acrostic!
What a dynamic acrostic poem. Amazing.
I absolutely love this, Jason!
Fabulous!!! Love it!!!💕❤️❤️
Yes it does! This is wonderful.
Loved this!! Especially that last line :)