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Sentimental Journey

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By Raine FielderPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
Sentimental Journey
Photo by Clint McKoy on Unsplash

I could name all the freckles on your skin

I could trace them with my kiss and make constellations

But the memory of your body

Memory alone is no consolation

Where your shoulder joined your neck

The scent and taste of salt and earth

The weight of you on top of me

And the wait of what it’s worth

Where we were when the sun came up

Curtains back, pillow talk, bed unmade

Swollen lips, finger tips trace your face

eyes warm soft sun-bleached suede

if I’m honest that was the best time

the only one to reach the sky

wrapped you up, filled my cup

we were always meant to say goodbye

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About the Creator

Raine Fielder

Raine has been writing poetry since she was in seventh grade. She has written several poems, song lyrics, short stories and eight books. Writing is her main purpose.

https://linktr.ee/RaineFielder

I will NEVER use AI for anything I create.

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