there's something wrong with my eyes
there's something wrong with me
i thought i closed them ten minutes ago
but the lights i still can see
there's something wrong with my ears
there's something wrong with me
i turned off every single source of noise
but the sounds still are haunting me
there's something wrong with my taste buds
there's something wrong with me
i just wolfed down a three course meal
and i'm completely savour free
there's something wrong with my fingers
there's something wrong with me
i cant discern anything that i touch
everything feels the same you see
there's something wrong with my nose
there's something wrong with me
my olfactory senses have gone awry
all smells it seems had to flee
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
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Comments (2)
Sometimes it’s better to not feel anything. Life is easier that way. But I don’t think it’s entirely possible. I wouldn’t be a writer if I didn’t feel anything. That’s for sure. It could spring a shapely song from this poem. I think you even invented a new poetic form, I’m not sure, I don’t know them all. Great job!
My sixth sense got chills. Ain't even know I had one of those.