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Awaken

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By Aspen Marie Published about 2 hours ago 1 min read
Max Streicher: Sleeping Giants

Breathing giant

Soft rhythmic sighing

Taking up all

Room’s expanse

Nylon skin whispering

Silkily sliding

Back and forth

You spoke to me

Of gentle times

To come

When I might

One day have

A safe place to

Lay my head

Soothed to sleep in

Clean, white sheets

I watched you

For hours

Inhaling, exhaling

Syncing mine to yours

If only I knew

Where that old

Sketchbook went

I would happily

Retrace your seams

Just now, my

Own breath stirred

A memory of a

Feeling, evoked by

A sculpture, sketched

In pencil

Many years ago

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About the Creator

Aspen Marie

In love with life and all of its foibles.

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  • Paul Stewartabout 2 hours ago

    Striking and self affirming. I love how connected to everything you are, lass. It makes your writing feel like a little gaze beyond the veil into Marie's beautiful mind. I also love the fact that you find beauty even when other things are there too. Love this poem a lot. Felt succinct but deep and intimate.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout 2 hours ago

    Gosh this was incredibly beautiful! Loved it so much! 😍😍😍😍😍

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