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semi-permanent solution

self-reflective poem.

By Paul StewartPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
semi-permanent solution
Photo by Anastasiya Badun on Unsplash

when the pain is too much to bear

I dig

I dig

when the stress is too much to carry

I dig

I dig

when the hurt I've caused weighs too much

I dig

I dig

Fingers into palms

Pressing into skin

Hoping to pierce

Hoping for release

semi-permanent solution

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • Shirley Belk2 years ago

    Descriptive account of tension....excellent

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    I kind of want to counter that with open palms connecting to other open palms.

  • Okay now that explains the cover pic. I thought you meant digging a grave for the people who hurt us 🤣🤣🤣 Loved your poem! 🍩🥐

  • I love the lines 'fingers into palms / pressing into skin' especially. Great write, you're a masterful poet.

  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    Don’t dig too hard! 😁 I use to bang my head on the wall. It really hurt but boy did it help! It didn’t. Anyway..you’ve been busy! I’ve been a bit off and off vocal most days the last week or so .. feels longer.. I dunno. I have no concept of time these days. I shall get to your other pieces soon. Hope you are travelling alright… I just read Kristen’s identity piece ! How good was it right!! I am off to the dentist in a min ..more fillings.. too many lollies! 😅 Lol. Adios!

  • This is me, through & through. Unless I decide to slap myself across the cheek or pound my forehead with the heel of my hand.

  • Kristen Balyeat2 years ago

    My grandma used to tell me that she’d dig her nails into her hands to keep from crying. I always felt sad that she’s never let the tears out. If I find myself in the situation you wrote so perfectly, I just shake my hands out as hard as I can and envision the thoughts being thrown from my fingertips. *as a small side, on the 7th line you have a little typo - *much*

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