scratches in my mind - esteem
Another thought-provoking senryu
adore me, of course
but just respect me more, please
plant my words, as seeds
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Author's Notes: Another in my "scratches in my mind" series. The links to the others can be found below.
scratches in my mind - passion
scratches in my mind - perspective
scratches in my mind - disingenuous ignorance is bliss...
scratches in my mind - per sempre
scratches in my mind - only four letters
The song I Wanna Be Adored by The Stone Roses has been in my head the last few days, so that may have inspired the above piece, somewhat! This has a much deeper meaning than could ever really be covered in 17 syllables, but I think I make it clear enough. It's always something of a wrestle in my mind.
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Paul Stewart
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It's difficult for me to know where to start with a review of this book as it was, for me, an entirely unique experience and one that I'll probably never have again. I don't want that to be interpreted as unenjoyable but it has left me scratching my head a little and ruminating on its content, its themes and its characters.
By Rachel Deeming3 days ago in BookClub
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I know that wrestling match! You really nailed it in a mere 17 syllables, however! Nicely done, Paul! Congratulations on a well-deserved Top Story. (Sorry I am late to the party!)
Loved this Paul! Congratulations on Top Story!
Congratulations on having your story featured as a top story on Vocal! This is a remarkable achievement, and it's clear why your work has received such recognition. Your storytelling is truly exceptional. The narrative was not only compelling but also beautifully crafted, holding my attention from start to finish. The way you developed the characters and plot was masterful, making the story both engaging and thought-provoking. Your unique voice and perspective shine through, setting your work apart. Itβs evident that you poured a lot of passion and effort into this piece, and it has certainly paid off. I look forward to reading more of your incredible stories in the future. Keep up the fantastic work! Best regards, Dr. Jay
Congrats on TS!!
Congratulations ππ top story
A well deserved tribute and top story Paul.
Simple but deep. Respect in every relationship is the bedrock, I think. Can never go wrong with The Stone Roses. That takes me back. Nice one, chum.
Great to see you back on top stories ππ₯°π
Congratulations Paul
Congratulations π on top story
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ππππππ
Respect that is lacking these days...congrats on top story!
Yess this is how I feel π― very good π
Congrats on Top story, Paul!! This has been a great senryu series. Glad to see such a good one get Top Story!
Respect is so important to me...it's like the ultimate love verb. Well done, Paul and Congratulations on your Top Story!
Figures they'd pick a Stewart original to be one of the first Top Stories in this new Vocal age we've entered. Will be curious to see if you notice a difference in engagement with the new setup π
Wow! congrats on top story!
Spectacular Senyu!!! Loved it!!! Congratulations on Top Story too!!! β₯β₯β₯
hey congrats on the top story pal
Ooh, that's set me thinking... I'm not sure which I value more!
Yes, it's one thing being adored, but respect is more important. I love your important message in these short words!
Oooh! Nice! Like the message in this! Your accruing quite a collection of gems with these!
Oooo, that's definitely very deep! Loved your Senryu! π©π₯
Thought provoking indeed! I love this one.
Far out, I havenβt heard that song in ages! Great work, as always βΊοΈ