scratches in my mind - perspective
Another inspirational, thought-provoking senryu
as death awaits us,
life continues, regardless,
until we perish
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until we perish
life continues, regardless,
all is awaiting
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Author's Notes: Another thought-provoking, inspirational senryu duo for you all in this unexpected mini-series.
Below are the others in the "scratches in my mind" series so far:
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Paul Stewart
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A Little Bit Of God
January 2026 I thought I’d spend the night in neon lights on grainy film but my brother is telling me how an eternity of hell is caused by prevalent peace, and who am I to disrupt such a thing? So I found myself in the same skin with the same sights, wondering whether or not I am one of those– do I feel peace? Do I expect more when it is gone? It being everything. We’re running out of time but the car is belching up something strange and we’ve got God in between our eyes nodding along to every apology and plea spoken for our friends and loved ones– they don’t know any better, they’ll come around eventually. He’s telling me about barbed wire guides around lives and ties and wives and lies and, look, the snow is starting to fall so I guess we better hang up soon. But it’s been too long. We’re building fields of skills and realms of distrust and these moments are only seen now, can no longer be read as words, only swept with eyes upon oil pastels or smudged charcoal. It’s a painting of an evening, like Daniel’s soles in Edgar Degas’ mind, but if anything is just it’s the lack of unrest in skin like His and lives like this– okay, so maybe five hours on the phone is a lot if you have a job and you’re trying to cook dinner, but only one of us falls into that gorge and only one of us believes in what lies beneath it. My brother tells me things that sit in my spirit like half an ounce of prospect and a squeeze of bourn, how he tells God to let me in: despite my sins, despite all the moons in between these calls, despite the burning in both of our throats. I do feel peace here. I also feel that my peace is a subpar window job, a pinky’s strength avoiding blizzards inside the bedsheets. I’d like to spend more nights like this, with contrasting disaster living between a speakerphone, and God finding some space in between.
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Affection and Healing for Yourself
During the night of the last quarter moon, I gathered my ritual supplies. I carefully handled the chunk of black tourmaline that would protect me from your overall negative and narcissistic energy. I carefully walked the house with my stick of selenite in hand, asking the universe to cleanse our working space.
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Comments (7)
Another Paulindrome! There I said it, hehehehehehe 🍩🥐
Admire how you capitalize on the positioning of each word in these! Another triumph!
As Rachael says, may you long remain itchy!
I like these scratches. I hope you remain itchy.
Just keep going and see where it all takes us. Very nice, Paul.
Inspiring- woop woop! There better be some good stuff up ahead then! 😄
This reminded me of a favorite poetic line: ‘Because I could not stop for death, Death kindly stopped for me.’ All is awaiting. Hopeful and terrifying at the same time.