Sailing On A Silent Sea
A Thoughtpiece In A Villanelle

Introduction
I saw the phrase "Silent Sea" in the name of a Netflix film and thought that could be the basis of a peaceful poem
The music is "La Mer" by Claude Debussy.
Sailing On A Silent Sea
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Sailing On This Silent Sea
I'm In My Boat, All Alone
This Is Sweet Freedom For Me
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On This Water I Feel Free
In The Quiet, On My Own
Sailing On This Silent Sea
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Perfect Calm Is All I See
The Calmest Place, I Have Known
This Is Sweet Freedom For Me
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Wish That You Were Here With Me
To See The Sun Bring The Dawn
Sailing On This Silent Sea
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Such A Perfect Place To Be
All My Sorrows Long Have Flown
This Is Sweet Freedom For Me
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To Find True Love, Here's The Key
I Treasure The Love You've Shown
Sailing On This Silent Sea
This Is Sweet Freedom For Me
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About the Creator
Mike Singleton π Mikeydred
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Comments (2)
This was so beautiful Mike. Loved it!
The rhythm of the villanelle really mimics the lapping of water against a boat. Itβs a very peaceful poem, just as you had intended. Nicely done.