Recanted Siblings
Sometimes we can not give what we never had, we carry subdued emotions from Mom and Dad❗
Bruise My Heart But You Can’t Break Me…
Abandoned siblings
Carry a backpack of emptiness -
Sharing Bitterness-
From My Image, They Paint A Perfect Picture of Who I Wished To Be…
I feel as though, I Am The Boy Outside Looking in…
I search for clarity in myself, to design a road leading to my Higher Self…
Raising Above Their Doubt,
To Be Who I Really Am…
Although it is tough to block out verbal vitriol, Piercing your ears from childhood, we grow with our fears…
On The Outside Stands Your Pride, forever Lonely waiting for an Invite to Come and Save you…
Struggling on The Inside, but Evolving In Front Of The Whole World…
Rehealing The Scars From Other Boy’s/ Girls.
It's a Painful Road But We Still Drive,
Pullover Destination To The Right 👉
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (13)
Powerful prose and extremely heartfelt. There is beauty in the struggle to be true to oneself and hold your head up among the nay sayers. You are so amazingly explosive with words.
Lots of interesting ideas and emotion here. Siblings are weird hahah. I only have one but I feel like I lost her long ago.. based on some of the things your poem touches on. Great to read something from you again. 😊
These lines "Abandoned siblings/Carry a backpack of emptiness" pack a real punch. Great poem!
It's all about the choices we make.
Keep up the great work!"
Every word is perfectly chosen to convey the emotion and message. Well done.
Until we don't. And that's okay, too.
Too sad!!! Excellently expressed!!!
Very well written! Going to the right! 😊
interesting
This made me so sad....they need to wake up and see!!!
I hope you are ok, Lonzo. You are greatly miss. 🥰
🫂 I can’t think of any words to express how sad and angry this makes me feel, but you’ve got a lot of people here in your corner, rooting for you to be your wonderful self