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raw egg, I beckon
Raw climb, I fall with each step
Pain in growth, rainfall
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Excellent 👌
Very creative! Nice work!
Beautifully evocative...so textured.
Exceptional!!! Love it!!!
I find this one so compelling, though I don't know why and am sure I don't fully understand it... which makes for an amazing haiku!! thank you for sharing, this is beautiful.