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Raw climb

Haiku

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Raw climb
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raw egg, I beckon

Raw climb, I fall with each step

Pain in growth, rainfall

heartbreak

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

  3. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  1. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

  2. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Mariann Carroll3 years ago

    Excellent 👌

  • Kaliyah Myers3 years ago

    Very creative! Nice work!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Exceptional!!! Love it!!!

  • Savannah Sveta3 years ago

    I find this one so compelling, though I don't know why and am sure I don't fully understand it... which makes for an amazing haiku!! thank you for sharing, this is beautiful.

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