Rare Beauty
Uncommon Treasure
Remarkable - she was
Uncommon to this place
She had a mystifying smile
Perfectly positioned, on her face.
Her eyes, the rarest color blue
That pierced the night, like shards of glass
Where she came from, no-one knew, or even dared to ask.
Her accent so unusual, her outfit was aberrant
That I thought she was exceptional, was blatantly apparent
Women like her, are more than scarce, she's both phenomenal and unique
I listened quietly, for the eccentric words that she might speak
Her demeanor unlike any other, she held the room captive with her style
It's noteworthy to mention, she was beauty extraordinaire
Ungraspable to imagine, anyone else that could compare.
To the rareness of her sparkle and the pristine way she shined
One day I'll find the way to make that remarkable woman, mine
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Comments (6)
Love the way this was structured
Nicely done.
We all either want to meet her, or want to be her.
Another gorgeous entry! Love it and she does sound very rare and lovely 🥰
Very nice my friend or should I just say beautiful at the risk of being repetitive 😀😀
Another goodie , loved this