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Puzzling

Senryu

By Andrew C McDonaldPublished 9 months ago Updated 9 months ago 1 min read

One piece at a time

Piece together her puzzle

Something does not fit

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Inspired by Kelli Sheckler-Amsden’s senryu below. More by the pic than the senryu, but, it is a lovely piece regardless.

Senryu

About the Creator

Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp

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  • Marie381Uk 9 months ago

    There is a dark piece to her story that should not fit her world🖌️🏆♦️♦️♦️

  • Mother Combs9 months ago

    Perfectly done, Andrew <3

  • Susan Fourtané 9 months ago

    Really nice. Something like who has a piece of my puzzle?

  • Rachel Deeming9 months ago

    The missing piece. Or the piece needed to make her fit in. Or the piece that will just never fit. Multiple meanings. Great stuff!

  • L.C. Schäfer9 months ago

    Lovely poem!

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