Poisoned
My thirty-third dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena.
This is my thirty-third dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena, a more graphically vicious one than normal.
The music I have chosen is "Poison" by Rita Ora.
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You Have Been Poisoned By One You Trusted
They Built You Up And Then Gained Your Favour
Now Your Life Is Fading You're Disgusted
You Never Thought Your Pain They Would Savour
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Lying On Your Cold Mortuary Slab
They Want To Make Sure That You Die In Pain
A Blunt Rusty Knife, With A Final Stab
Then Your Blood Hits The Floor, A Bright Red Rain
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Your Veins Are Burning Hot Fire And Cold Ice
The Raven Alights To Pluck Out Your Eyes
The Poison's Burning You Taking Your Life
Your Heart Split Open By Their Rusty Knife
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Your Body Is Cold, Your Life Is No More
The Rats Swarm In, And They Feast On Your Corpse
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Wow, this was so well done.
Very dark and macabre. Excellent work :)
Not a fan of the dark but I always enjoy a good rhyme and a good tuneππ
Oooo, loved the Bright Red Rain! This poem was so fantastic! I enjoyed reading it!
Such a thriller, I could hear Orson Welles reading this on my head!
Chilling! Good rhyme and rhythm. Well done.
Well done horror. If I have nightmares, Iβm calling you, collect! ππβ€οΈ
Awesome performance poem!!!π₯°π₯°π₯°