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Pillow Pandemonium

A Playful Poem on the Joy of Pillow Fights

By Quincy.VPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

Puffy pillows piled up high,

People waiting for the signal to fly,

Playful giggles fill the air,

Pandemonium erupts without a care.

Pillows start flying left and right,

Pandemonium turns into a pillow fight,

Pillows whizzing past like a blur,

People ducking, dodging with a purr.

Pillow feathers start to fly,

People's hair and clothes askew, oh my,

People laughing, screaming, and squealing,

Pillow fight madness, it's an amazing feeling.

Pillows everywhere, on the floor and on the bed,

People jumping, leaping, and turning their heads,

Pillow fight chaos reigns supreme,

People lost in the moment, it's like a dream.

Pillow fight frenzy starts to slow,

People taking deep breaths, starting to glow,

Pillows on the floor, feathers in the air,

Pillow fight over, but memories to share.

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To the readers who took the time, To read these words, in rhythm and rhyme,Thank you for joining in on the fun, And letting this poem brighten up your sun.

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Quincy.V

My blog is a space where I share tips, insights, and inspiration related to the topic, with the goal of helping my readers improve their area of interest.

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  • J. R. Lowe3 years ago

    You captured the feeling of pillow fights so well!

  • M Dannenfelser3 years ago

    I love this, especially the last few lines! So fun

  • Awww, this was so fun and wonderful!

  • Very good and Playfully written 💯💜🥰🎉

  • I liked that, this was a very fun poem. It had a great rhythm and a great feel the whole way through!

  • Novel Allen3 years ago

    Oh! Looks like so much fun, Enjoyed the fun.

  • Love the poem and the emotions you brought forth

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