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Paint the Ceiling

Skybath

By Harper LewisPublished 3 months ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read
My rocks and tchotchkes

I want to paint the ceiling

in my bathroom, want to

turn it into an azure sky

to gaze at in my bath, where

the whole world melts

into sound and color,

the soft light of my candles

glowing into my rocks,

smoke from my incense

curling into invisible scent.

Sometimes I put my lapis

in my mouth, the cool blue

warming on my tongue,

the thin edge resting on my lips,

like a kiss

from the underbelly of the earth,

elemental cobalt and a ribbon

of gold making love to my mouth

as I gently open my third

eye with a slender obelisk

of rose quartz between

my breasts, reclining

over my heart, the carnelian heart-

shaped stone stuttering energy

into my root chakra.

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About the Creator

Harper Lewis

I'm a weirdo nerd who’s extremely subversive. I like rocks, incense, and all kinds of witchy stuff. Intrusive rhyme bothers me.

I’m known as Dena Brown to the revenuers and pollsters.

MA English literature, College of Charleston

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  • Caitlin Charlton3 months ago

    This was a lovely spiritual experience you have brought us through. 🔮💎Love the video and seeing all those rocks. The instrument in the background was perfect. I like reading how you value, and work with your rocks. The way the soft light of your candles, glow into your rocks. That was such a lovely, mesmerizing imagery you created, in just that one line. 🔮💎Connecting with words —the rocks back to the earth 'from the underbelly of the earth' such magical vibes. Your keen eye tracing all the features of this rock. Down to the ribbon of gold making love to your mouth. 👌🏾 🔮💎This was hitting all the senses. Getting us in the mood to meditate and settle our minds. Awesome work as always, Harper. Also love that you had the rose quartz between your breast. Spicy, but best place for it. It's a beautiful stone. 🤗 ❤️ 🖤

  • Tanya Lei3 months ago

    This was a really nice vision <3

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