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By Harper LewisPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
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You really took me for a ride,

into despair I slid

every time you lied.

You didn’t care if I died inside,

While I sought, you hid.

You really took me for a ride.

I wasted salt and water every time I cried.

Down my face the wasted tears slid

every time you lied.

Are you full of pride

from abandoning your kid?

You really took me for a ride.

I considered homicide,

wanted to take you off the grid

every time you lied.

You’re as consistent as the tide,

at my expense indulging your id.

You really took me for a ride

every time you lied.

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Villanelle

About the Creator

Harper Lewis

I'm a weirdo nerd who’s extremely subversive. I like rocks, incense, and all kinds of witchy stuff. Intrusive rhyme bothers me.

I’m known as Dena Brown to the revenuers and pollsters.

MA English literature, College of Charleston

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