On Top of the World
(or at least on top of the city)
On top of the world
pondering existence, oops..
Lookout below! splat
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Center Stage with Paul Stewart
*** I'm keen to republish the interviews I did for my series with Vocal creators. It's been a few years and I thought it might be nice to revisit these wonderful conversations. I'll be releasing them one at a time for a few weeks/months.
By Heather Hubler3 days ago in Interview
Comments (18)
Oh my gosh this photo looks so amazing, but it’s reminding me of my fear of height lol After reading your haiku, I am not sure whether to laugh or to completely avoid going anywhere too high up. Very unexpected, gripping despite its length and hilarious. I loved this! 👌🏽👏🏽
Ahh!! Cathy!! This was so dark but also..... brilliant as all hell!! I totally had this idea but didn't know how to execute it!! Love the way you did it!!
LOL
Oh, crap! I hate when that happens! LOL great job, my friend, and an awesome photo!
Oh dear! I read the first line, and the rest came as an unexpected shock, much as it would! Very experiential!
Wasn’t sure if you dropped something or did some skydiving without a parachute…either way very clever use of the three lines! And cool photo!
Yikes!
look out even when in the air! Lovely, Kathy!
Well....shit. haha! Exactly where my mind goes any time I'm somewhere high. Good one, and so happy to have some laughs at the crack of dawn. Great photo, btw!
Mind the gap!
LOL - love the turn of events in this one =)
That splat? Funny!
Hahahahahahhahaaha loved the splat!
Haha! Splat! Love it!
What a twist!!! Good one!!!❤️❤️💕
It started off so pleasant. But then...well, you know what happened! Lol. Thank you for the laugh, Cathy!
😂 I love it
LOVE IT!