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On a Blanket On the Ground

Ode to Heidi and Bjorn Hauge

By Andrew C McDonaldPublished about a year ago β€’ 1 min read

Nineteen & eighteen on a movie date

Nervous youths, ecstatically scared

Yet sure we were each other’s fate

…

We left the theater to take a ride

Ended walking by the river

Hand in hand, side by side

…

Snuggled together, arms around

My head on your shoulder

On a Blanket On The Ground

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We stared with starry eyes

Transfixed by a private universe

Composed of passionate sighs

…..

Lost completely in each other

We barely looked upward

As our racing hearts fluttered

…..

I remember the moaning happy sound

Of our pounding pulses, heavy breath

On a blanket on the ground

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It was by the bank of that river

Where we first felt love’s caress

A blissful pain that made me shiver

…..

We were both nervous, uncertain

Fumbling our way to heaven

As we threw back that mysterious curtain

…..

I gave you my soul all around

I gave you mind, heart, body

On a blanket on the ground

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We thought we’d be together

In eternal luxurious ecstasy

From that riverbank to forever

…..

A year later we made our vows

Standing by the riverbank

Perfect tomorrows from blissful now’s

…..

I recall how the preacher frowned

As we stood together there

On a blanket on the ground

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Now the blanket sits in a box

Warming only empty promises

Since into our coop came a fox

…..

Sometimes I pull the blanket out

Remembering how it felt

Warm and cozy before the doubt

…..

The way my heart would race and pound

Whenever we’d take a riverside stroll .. to end ..

On a blanket on the ground

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I wrap it around my shoulder

And wander to the riverbank

Stand by the sturdy boulder

…..

Where we once stargazed

Without ever looking up

When true love still blazed

…..

I smell it’s aroma as memories abound

Wondering if you’ve been with her here

On a blanket on the ground

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About the Creator

Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp

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  • Joe Pattersonabout a year ago

    Outstanding.

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