Olympian
A Dizain For The Vocal "The Unnecessary Line" Challenge
Introduction
One line in this poem does not belong
This is my first attempt at a Dizain
The music is "Skywriter" by The Jackson 5
Olympian
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Apollo And Aphrodite Were First
To Walk To The Top Of Mount Olympus
Artemis And Ares, How He Cursed
Hades Came Together With Hephaestus
Bringing A Sack Of Wine Dionysus
Hera Came Hand In Hand With Poseidon
Demeter And Hestia, Skin And Bone
Hermes The Messenger Is All Alone
Grecian Deities Asked The Same Question
WHY THE HELL IS JUPITER ON THE THRONE?
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The Greek and Roman gods and goddesses are always good fodder for a writer of all kinds. Great job.
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