Nightly Kiss
For Challenge Sky-ku
By DaphsamPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read

Nightcafe by Daphsam
a bedtime routine
the kiss of sun and water
an intake of breath

a bedtime routine
the kiss of sun and water
an intake of breath
Comments (7)
Love your use of "kiss" for this. Perfect description. (Need to lose that last E I think ☺)
I'm with Dharrsheena. I felt the calm here.
A well-wrought, lovely sentiment!
This felt so relaxing! Loved your Haiku!
What a great haiku!
Oh I love this!
What a nice way to end the day and picture a sunset.