deciduous life—
awaits the final touches
to a masterpiece…
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Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry.
"Life is Love Experienced" -LW
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Comments (18)
"Deciduous life," lovely.
I love how 'deciduous life' rolls off the tongue. This is a very impressive haiku, Lamar! Good luck on the challenge!
Ah a special masterpiece! Awesome. I had to look up the first word straight away! Don’t think I’d come across deciduous before.. 😊🍃
I must admit. This was impressive. I read it and then I sat and thought 🤔 The way the meaning creeps up on you... There's that element of mystery in creation. And you allowed that to shine beautifully here. Best of luck in the challenge, Lamar 🤗❤️
This is stunning! The word choice is really what makes it. I loved it!
💖Lovely, Lamar
Typically impressive poem, along with the title and image!😃
Oooo, deciduous is a new word for me. Loved your Haiku!
You are just as solid an artist
Uber-gorgeous! Go Lamar!🧡🍂💪🏾
Wonderfully done!
Those autumn leaves do create masterpieces. A beautiful haiku!
brilliant!
Perfect in every way.
Magnificent take on the challenge - I love imagining the artistry of autumn landscapes! Bravo, Lamar! :)
Beautifully done Lamar- Love the idea of nature always in flux :)
Stunning haiku. I love your use of the word deciduous!
Well, I learned a new word today—deciduous. If I learn something new, then it’s definitely worth the read. Also, beautiful imagery, making the landscape seem like a painting waiting for the final touches to finish it. Makes it fit the cyclical idea of the seasons perfectly—they’re never quite finished. Well done.