Mystic's Dew
A Comma Hastening
The dew of inspiration
The sweat of nature
Heaven's ointment only can make aware the soul
The mystic stirs the persuasion of light to ground
Of semaphore to sound
Oh, look, a butterfly
To bring frequent winds to space
To harbour feelers like petals
To drink of the surface
From the branch of metamorphosis
To know the mystic's dew
Is to know what's inside of you
Rising sweetly in my mind
A well-placed palm
The edge of a song
Of a sound
Only for you
This muse thing, who is who
When a mystic endeavors
To know one better
An open ground can be your footing
Or a sky to space
What will happen child if his mind awakens
What then
Then the precipice of grace will
Be his welcome
If want is a human condition
Then Heaven's ointment will make aware the soul and
The mystic will stir the persuasion of light to ground
~/\~
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Canuck Scriber Lisa Lachapelle
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Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH6 days ago in Critique
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Such a beautiful poem!
I loved how that was a wonderful falling of words that I followed from beginning to end
Absolutely brilliant!!!😊💕
Beautiful!