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My Summer Vacation

a poem

By Pamela WilliamsPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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A spot of sunlight fire-kissed my face,

High noon, the clock struck (too early for gin)

Sipping my potion (I was such a disgrace)

A waft of combustion drifted hazily in

And then, a green car drove through the lake!

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Pamela Williams

“Suppose I had wings like the dawning day and flew across the ocean. Even then your powerful arm would guide and protect me.”

— Psalm 139:9–10, Contemporary English Version (CEV)

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  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    Well, well, what an adventure! It's the misadventures that make vacations, sometimes. A cute poem, Pamela!

  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    Excellent poem and excellent storytelling. Love it ♥︎

  • Caitlin Charltonabout a year ago

    I love that the picture was taken by you, what a crazy day this was 🤣 I love the vibe you brought with it. It gave me the feeling of being there too. Wait… did you still drink the gin even though it was too early for it?

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    What the heck? lol. This is great.

  • The Invisible Writerabout a year ago

    Great poem. I saw those water cars at Disney crazy to think they were made in the sixties

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    I love how you let this day unfold as it would

  • Komalabout a year ago

    Fantastic! I really enjoyed reading it 👍

  • MD RUKEL MIAabout a year ago

    Nice

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Never too early if you're on holiday 😉

  • Abdullah Khanabout a year ago

    Sunlit moments, surreal and strange, life’s quirky dance through a hazy frame.

  • Jay Kantorabout a year ago

    Hi PW - It’s Gin time somewhere🍸— Such a Coincidence: One of these amphicars - I think they are called -cruised next to our boat on our early morning fresh special Seabreeze wake-up's as my Corgi sat at the stern — The weird green thing couldn’t get out of it’s own way: It’s name “The Pickle 🥒 Long Beach, Ca.” You’re fun..! J-Bud

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    Great poem, Pamela.

  • Danny Prem kumarabout a year ago

    Lovely poem mam.....

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