My Cake
The Feeling of freedom is the only way to achieve Living…
Can I Have
My Cake
And Eat It
Too…
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What if I just want to eat, without you…
-Happiness isn’t always about 2, maybe it’s -me first then you.
-Your steady waisting
My time…
Making a mockery of the past…
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Without you
There would be,
-No one to lie…
-No one to cry about…
I will exist,
Habitation Alive!
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Not Hiding Myself,
So You Can’t
See How Big,
I Really Am…
No Tea 🫖🚫
No Shade🚫
Can I Have My Cake
And Eat It Too…
I'm Ready To Take Up Some Room!
Freedom does not happen when Stress is Involved…
I'll Eat My Cake Just How I Like It…
I’m Talking About
Big Slices
For Myself
And I Ain’t Even
Leaving Crumbs… 🍰
A simple taste of bitterness can ruin a sweet treat-
So Can I Have
My Cake and
Eat it Too?
-Because That’s Exactly What I Desire To Do-
🎂One Day I Will Touch The Sky!
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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"Hear me out, what if we ran away together?" "Where do you want to go?" "Anywhere but here. We could move to a new city or to Canada, or we could disappear from society to live in the middle of the woods. Maybe a combination of two of those things would be good. What do you say?"
By Kay Husnick6 days ago in Fiction
Comments (35)
Very nice, very nice.
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Yummy poem! I love the imagery and diction there. As a sweet tooth myself, this relates to me very much!
I to like the images that you chose to explain the words.
I'm hungry now! The imagery in your piece is great. Lovely job!
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Loved this with great imagery of a chocolate cake in front of me, Just remember to have something beneath you to fall on when you finally touch the sky. You'll want to keep on being famous so there will be no time to fall.
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Heck, have your cake and eat it too, just have lots of cake. Such a freeing poem. Now I want cake. So wonderful.
Cake is good as is your poetry
This is very deep and spot-on Lonzo. There are many times in our life's where we need to take care of our own heart first no matter how much it hurts.
Nice! I loved the line “A simple taste of bitterness can ruin a sweet treat.” So true in many ways. This is great! 💖😍
A stunning piece Louii - we should all get to touch the sky! oh yeah and mmmmm cake!
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What a great poem about shaking a bad partner and focusing on your own needs for a change. It’s such a stupid phrase, you can’t have your cake and eat it too…what’s the point of that? Thanks for sharing this with us!
Absolutely love this!!!
☺️👏 I Love a bit of cake! Haha. 😁 🍰
Well done, Lonzo. (Hey, what is the point of cake if we cannot eat it, anyway?!) I love your clever banter and wordplay. Very creative!
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An awesome write and to quote an old song just don't leave that cake out in the rain because you'll never have that recipe again.
Love this
that’s awesome Lonzo, yes, enjoy that icing, 😊😊
Omggggg yesssss! Sometimes, we have to put ourselves first! Loved your poem!
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You deserve the best of both worlds, I liked the play on words, waisting - quite clever Lonzo!