Photo by Frederic Audet on Unsplash
On the mountain top
It’s a long way down, don’t frown
As your flesh meets ground.
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Joe Patterson
Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.
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Comments (7)
The ending was unexpected. Well done!
What must go through ones thoughts to end it like that?
Omgsh. Didn’t see that coming. Lol
Great piece. That last line is great.
Fabulous & powerful💕
Oh snap! Great punch on that last line! And the picture went so well. Those people look like ants. Well done :)
The last line is really powerful, it git me like the ground! Good reminder to be careful on mountain tops!!