mother nature vs the devil [part one]
The Courthouse Battle
This scene is set in the imagined courtroom of the Gods; the highest court of universal justice which has never before been invoked. This is an unprecedented case. Both parties involved are extremely passionate.
We open with the prosecution, who is Mother Nature. She is weary and is speaking strongly but at a relatively normal pace.
Once we reach the devil’s opening statement - this flows very fast and angrily. There are a few choice swear words in there (content warning disclaimer 😉) that I felt were appropriate to the context.
“Your honour allow me to explain
We are here today to charge this dame
She has survived the centuries
Feeding from souls she stole from thee
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The earth has now become a prison
Instead of your perfect design for heaven
It began when she learned to worship the fire
gaining powers to manifest her desires
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But those desires are far from pure
And she tricks others to follow her obscure
games of deception that are now so vast
Earth’s skin has started disintegrating fast
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My insects and birds, instead of flying
Are being poisoned by the billion and rapidly dying
Humans imprison and torture innocent souls
For entertainment, pleasure and financial goals
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They sear flesh and drink of the udder
They self poison with alcohol and sleep in the gutters
They sell what is sacred for cheap dopamine
And stuff down their guilt with sweet nicotine
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And this is the world that she has created
It’s blasphemy at best, hell instated
How is this right that I must empower
The very person who destroys me by the hour!
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I can’t continue your honour, I’ve had enough
This hell has now become too much
I am forced to live on the edge of extremes
And my heart is burdened by the weight of Earth’s screams
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The elements have lost their ability to extol
For the humans are all under her control
How can balance possibly be restored?
When her grip is mighty and she is so adored?
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And by your laws I have to bestow
power to those who worship my flow
And she is devout in her praise
She offers me devotion, love and grace
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Yet look at what she does with this power!
She is using it to devour
Millions of souls everyday
And they all succumb to death and decay
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She’s done it so long and made life so formal
That all over this world they believe death is normal!!!
The pain in my heart is too much to bear
You must strip her of power before humans lose all care
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Look what’s happened to my beautiful crust,
Look at the mountains that they crumble to dust
Pouring my rock into the sea
To build more of what they call “city”
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Look at my forests being stripped bare
Look at the lands ablaze there
Look at the garbage dumped on my shores
Look at my rivers and chemicals poured
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Look at my ice, it’s melting in sheets
Can’t you feel my pain through every heart beat?
The humans have lost all sensitivity
They take plants from the earth to place in captivity!
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This devil has woven a maze, a web
Luring vulnerable humans into her bed
And they flock by the million to sign her deals
To exist on her decaying hamster wheels
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The game is rigged beyond belief
Of these poor humans she creates thiefs
She sets up terrible trickery
To walk them straight into misery
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You must see how all of her dealings
Are in complete disregard of my feelings?
She has them dredge soils in favour of mines
To build on vast evil heavenly shrines!!
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And so many humans follow her lead
Neglecting the very source that they bleed!
Look how they worship her and not me
I beg you to see this insanity!!!
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They all desire that which she sells
She offers my gold and in return they build Hell
This isn’t fair, it isn’t just,
You must help me, for in you I trust”
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The gods look to each other, each taking deep breath
They can all feel Mother Nature is very close to death
They see her aged skin, haggard and worn
Feel the depths of her pain and how her heart’s torn,
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They empathise with her, of course,
She’s their creation, they are her source
Her suffering is also theirs,
For after birth we’re forever paired
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They look at the devil, so sweet and demure
Curious to understand her more
“Well, young lady, what do you say
In defence of these powerful accusations today?”
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As she walks into to the witness stand
She rises with an air, haughty and grand
Flashing a smile for all to see
Confidence that she will walk away free
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Her beauty permeates the room
As captivating as Enceladus’ moon
Her curling locks of bright red hair
and Emerald eyes, a dazzling pair
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It’s clear from the outset she has the most power
Mother Nature, once majestic, how she now cowers
The Gods, they sigh and take a long inhale
“Go ahead, young lady, tell your tale”
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“Well. I really ought to start here if I may,
And express my utter disbelief and dismay.
There is nothing remotely unjust or unfair
About anything that is happening on Earth down there!!
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I’m outraged that I’ve been summoned today
For this is my time which should be spent in play
I have much to do, I am a busy soul
I’m Earth’s most powerful CEO
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And all that I do is well within your laws
I do no wrong (though I may have some ‘flaws’)
I worship Mother Nature from dawn until dusk
And I even wait until midnight to do most of my work
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So how she can do this to such a devotee
Is truly upsetting and baffling to me
Dragging me before your court
And telling the truth with such distort
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For someone supposedly so pure of heart
She’s certainly given me a terrible start
How awful to you I must sound
After hearing these accusations abound!
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She has introduced me with terrible repute
And all of it I must strongly refute!
When I am worshipping the divine,
The humans are choosing to commit these crimes!
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I can’t stop them or stand in their way!
What am I to do if they don’t want to pray?
Your gift of freewill is not mine to take!
That was made clear when Adam ate the snake!
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These humans choose their destiny
It’s their will to fund my companies
And in that you cannot interfere
I know the laws, and all of them I revere
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So why must I stand and plead my case?
When I commit no crime against Mother Nature or Grace?
I am your ideal model student!
I learned your laws, I am perfectly prudent!”
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“So you deny taking souls from ourselves
and turning Mother Nature to a land called Hell?
Trapping humans from ascending beyond?
To this accusation, how do you respond?”
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“First of all. I don’t take them, they are given
and all of them have the choice between hell and heaven
They all know your rules, and those rules they ignore
Ever since man first called woman “Hoare”
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Ever since man chose to infect
his body with flesh, consciousness in neglect
Neglecting his wife in favour of liquor
Becoming animal himself, and then choosing to bicker
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With anyone who dares to look his way
Even as his intoxicated mind begins to sway
So very uncaring, no love in man at all
Doesn’t he deserve to be punished and fall?
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When he raises his hands to his innocent child?
That’s not your frequency that he’s dialled
No! For that, you are not there!
That happened many times to me, and did any of you care?
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So fuck, so what if I grew up to be
what earth would call a vigilante?
I adhere to every one of your laws without distort
The originals, and not the ones man contorts
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I am the protector of your rules
Which I ensure they all learn in schools
or at least from a stranger, guide or preacher
I ensure every single one has a teacher
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So when I ask them to trade their soul
It from freewill, better they know!
No one should dare to accuse me
of operating my business unfairly
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And something else I wish to say
To all these accusations today
Is that all the consequences man is suffering
Are actually from laws that YOU are all governing
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Laws of Karma, law of mirrors
Law of cause and effect by their errors
These have nothing to do with me,
Those are foundations of this reality
.
The very one that you all created
You can’t tell me now this isn’t fated?
If your rules are a problem and I am too
Then it seems you hadn’t really thought this creation through
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Because arguably I’m doing your work
I’m testing for the pure of heart!
They all have the choice to say no
To worship her and her winds that blow,
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They could bathe in the same rivers as I
They could climb mountains and worship her sky
They could salute the sun as she rises each day
They could get on their damn knees and pray
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They choose and choose to go the wrong way,
They harm each other day after day
betraying their brothers, raping their mothers
They sell their sisters and fuck over others
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And even the ones you think aren’t so bad
Well you should see them when they are mad
That’s the truest test of all
Push their buttons, you’ll soon see their morals fall
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Only the purest deserve to live,
Those who seek to love and give
And even I help them on their way
I rescue those who repent, save them day after day
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I’m your best worker, one for the highest good
So deeply, deeply misunderstood.
Mother Nature blames me for this construction ??
But is it not man and his destruction??
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I offer them their deepest desire
To test the love that you both so require
Don’t you want to ensure it’s true ?
Isn’t that important to you?
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Any man can fake his best
And act at being loving when there is no real test
Look at your precious Adam, after all
Bet none of you expected him to fall.
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But he gorged the snake flesh just like Eve
Became immensely skilled to trick and deceive
And of him your precious humans were born
And aren’t they really just something to mourn?
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You talk of them being innocent
But why then do they chose Dissent?
Your laws are pretty damn clear
Follow love, overcome fear
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But they hear your name and begin to jeer
Too busy ordering another fucking beer
Drowning out the voices they hear
Of their screaming conscience and wives endless tears
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Innocent? Really? You really think?
I think your smart enough to see the link
For you all know that no harm can befall
Any man with love in his heart for ALL
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How many saviours do you need to send
To watch these humans twist and bend
the words given to help them mend
rifts in their hearts that they just pretend
don’t exist while they angrily defend
being a sorry excuse for a friend”
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Composing herself
for the sake of her health
She takes a long, deep breath
and calmly adjusts her seashell dress
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She knows better than to be triggered
But this situation is just so hard to figure
All she ever did was help to spot
Whose hearts were fake and who’s were not
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The Gods look at each other in disbelief
And the Devil feels some welcome relief
They ask if she is finished her lengthy spiel
And she decisively offers one more reel
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“I am the one protecting your heavenly gate!
From these wretched souls who deserve such fate!
I am outraged that you haven’t thanked me to date
No appreciation or invitation to celebrate
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You pat each other on the backs
You talk nicely about how your all that
And down there it’s me doing your work
Alone on my throne with my golden pitchfork
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I give thanks for all my meals
I follow the rules, I never steal
You won’t see me harm a child
Or beating a mother because I’m wild
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Those humans are the disgusting bunch
Just watch them chewing on bones for lunch
From chickens slaughtered by the billions
And cows murdered by the millions
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And that’s not even in a week
The numbers are at an all time peak
They even made machines to do their killing
For the sake of some desired sandwich filling
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In their hearts is an evil poisoning love
I’ve seen children ripping the wings from a dove
Are these blessed creatures I ask?
You want to take over my earthly task?
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I can talk more, I could talk all day
I haven’t said even a fraction of what I’ve got to say
But I feel my blood pressure now rising
(Which given the circumstances is hardly surprising)
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Tell me what law I’ve supposedly broken
D’you even realise I’m a doctor? And I warn them stop smoking?
I give them every good advice
But the don’t even care if they buy arsenic rice
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So what more do you need before surmising
that you all ought to be apologising
for this disruption to my day
Interrupting my fun and play
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Bringing me to this court is criminal
How can conscious beings act so subliminal?
I’m appalled, outraged, disgusted
And now? I feel quite exhausted”
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The Gods look to each other and call for recess
In need of time to allow this to digest
They hadn’t been paying enough attention to earth
Too busy playing with new universes birthed
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Thinking that Earth was their perfect creation
Working like clockwork, not needing saving
But this case made it clear that things are not good
And much more needed to be understood
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For Mother Nature and humans were meant to be immortal
and follow the clues to God’s portal
Yet fewer humans had been arriving
“Since the Egyptians” Zeus was surmising
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“Numbers have been seriously down”
They looked to each other with serious frown
“I just assumed they wanted to stay,
After all, we created for them a land of play”
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“But it does now seem somewhat strange,
That so few have come in an 8000 year range”.
Allah looked to Justitia with so much sorrow
And the Gods agreed to adjourn until tomorrow.
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[to be continued]
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Comments (28)
An absolutely stunning piece of storytelling, so excited for more to come!!
Look what’s happened to my beautiful crust, Look at the mountains that they crumble to dust Pouring my rock into the sea To build more of what they call “city” A brilliant and stand-out verse for me. This is excellent work Kayleigh! Thank you for writing it! What a valuable message!
May I suggest that there roles get exchanged for one day. So that they each must stand in the others shoes then let the gods rule. People of today are just starting to grasp the fact that we are no longer country's we are a world so inter connected that the stone dropped into a lake in Alaska creates a ripple that meets it self.
Reading this was so amazing; what an idea. And your execution is on point where I can feel the emotions in your words. Congrats on a top story!
This was a very poignant piece that I feel reflects what we’re all seeing on a daily basis. We’re living in a world in which these very things are actively taking place, and there’s such a harshness to it that many people refuse to acknowledge or accept. I love this so much. Keep up the writing.
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Can't wait for the ruling! This is so good I am in awe!
Loved it! can't wait for part 2 :)
Congratulations on Top Story
I could feel your exhaustion, anger, and sadness when writing this poem. I felt it too, deep in my marrow. What a weight to carry, to feel the suffering of the entire world, and to choose to be the one to bear that burden. She sounds so very, very alone.
WOW. I have to say you are a master of iambic and rhyme! This was captivating. I got a little confused as to who "she" was, Mother Nature or the Devil? Or someone else? So much truth in this. I'm very much looking forward to your next part! Congrats on TS! (I would recommend reading for some small typos, but they don't hinder the magnificence of your writing. ❤️)
TRULY AND UTTERLY AMAZING. LOVE IT AND AM SO LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE.
Excellent. I hope you continue on this theme. It was interesting and well composed. Great work!
Whaaaat adjourned?! Gonna be stalking you for the next part
My dear Kayleigh, this is a masterpiece! The Devil indeed hasn't broken any of God's law. She's the one keeping heaven safe from those who don't have a pure heart. Whoaaaa. I really hope this gets a Top Story! Can't wait for part 2!