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Misty Mountains

A High-Ku Haiku

By Natasja RosePublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Misty Mountains
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Dungeons and Caverns

Deep and old, shelter found - drat!

Now there are goblins...

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I had Tolkein on the brain, and a few hours left before the challenge closed. Deal with it!

Note for people struggling with the haiku count: Using apostrophes to cut out syllables might make you sound like Shakespeare, and possibly more than a little pretentious, but it's a valid and legitimate cheat.

Also, counting out on your fingers helps a lot.

(Particularly long note in order to hit the 100 minimum for poems)

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About the Creator

Natasja Rose

I've been writing since I learned how, but those have been lost and will never see daylight (I hope).

I'm an Indie Author, with 30+ books published.

I live in Sydney, Australia

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  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Fabulous!!!

  • Call Me Les3 years ago

    lol Drat! That made me chuckle.

  • SJ Covey3 years ago

    Love it 🥰❤️😍

  • Michael Darvall3 years ago

    Well it gave me a giggle! Thanks.

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