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Acidic blue eyes
Piercing heart and soul once more
Lies with no remorse
About the Creator
JBaz
I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.
I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.
Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.
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Comments (15)
Hi - Jb ~ Back to the poetry ~ How groovy! Coincidence: Jason, I'm publishing a story 'Eyes' with my original blue-eyed sketch tomorrow/with a very different slant. Jb-bud.in.l.a.
Gave me a shiver! Well done, JBaz!
Great haiku, and that's a terrific picture to go with it as well!
Wow this was really good
This was heavy and full of some serious impact!! Love this Haiku, Jason!!
Oooo, I especially loved the acidic blue! Your Haiku packed a punch!
Magnificently chilling!! A masterwork of an example of the brilliance of the haiku format :)
Telling lies without remorse is especially disturbing. The price of trust is steep these days! Great haiku!
nailed it!
Terrific closing line!!! Love it!!!❤️❤️💕
So powerful, in just three lines of 17 syllables very deep meaning. Loved this, Jason.
Those first two words just set the tone so completely!! Great haiku!!
I agree with RM. "Acidic blue" is awesome. A great haiku and statement, Jason!
Beautiful. Very beautiful and heart-wrenching. Very well done.
"Acidic Blue" is such a vivid description that goes perfectly with the theme. Very well done, Jason!