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Love, Rewritten

We edited each other until the plot broke.

By Milan MilicPublished 27 days ago 1 min read

We wrote each other in pencil first—

soft lines, easy laughter,

erasable promises on the back of receipts.

Then you started crossing things out:

my late-night honesty,

my too-big questions,

the way I cried during movies.

I did it too.

I trimmed my sentences

So they’d fit your silence.

I learned to smile on cue,

to swallow my “but wait—”

like it was a bad habit.

Soon we were editing in red ink,

margin notes everywhere:

Be less, be nicer, be lighter, be normal.

Our love became a document

passed back and forth,

tracked changes glowing like bruises.

I asked for a happy ending,

You suggested a shorter chapter.

We compromised with “maybe.”

Some nights I reread old versions of us,

The draft where you held my face

like it mattered,

The draft where I trusted you

without checking for the knife.

Now the pages are torn,

And the plot won’t hold.

Still, my hands remember

How to rewrite a person

until there’s almost nothing left

But the edits.

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About the Creator

Milan Milic

Hi, I’m Milan. I write about love, fear, money, and everything in between — wherever inspiration goes. My brain doesn’t stick to one genre.

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  • L.I.E25 days ago

    Wow so sad. Changing ourselves to fit the other person's version. While hoping to go back to the real love. Such a good poem

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