Love, Rewritten
We edited each other until the plot broke.

We wrote each other in pencil first—
soft lines, easy laughter,
erasable promises on the back of receipts.
Then you started crossing things out:
my late-night honesty,
my too-big questions,
the way I cried during movies.
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I did it too.
I trimmed my sentences
So they’d fit your silence.
I learned to smile on cue,
to swallow my “but wait—”
like it was a bad habit.
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Soon we were editing in red ink,
margin notes everywhere:
Be less, be nicer, be lighter, be normal.
Our love became a document
passed back and forth,
tracked changes glowing like bruises.
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I asked for a happy ending,
You suggested a shorter chapter.
We compromised with “maybe.”
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Some nights I reread old versions of us,
The draft where you held my face
like it mattered,
The draft where I trusted you
without checking for the knife.
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Now the pages are torn,
And the plot won’t hold.
Still, my hands remember
How to rewrite a person
until there’s almost nothing left
But the edits.
About the Creator
Milan Milic
Hi, I’m Milan. I write about love, fear, money, and everything in between — wherever inspiration goes. My brain doesn’t stick to one genre.


Comments (1)
Wow so sad. Changing ourselves to fit the other person's version. While hoping to go back to the real love. Such a good poem