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Learning to fly with no wings,
Seeing the sun in the middle of the night,
knowing everything is going to be alright.
Being able to feel accompanied while alone,
Hearing your voice even before you ring,
Love is warmth on a cold day,
A cold drink when you are thirsty.
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Sid Aaron Hirji
Canadian born man who finds literature and science equally fascinating. Trauma bleeds through generations, words heal the hidden scars.
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Comments (14)
Indeed, love is very beautiful, and your work is a reflection of it. It’s very nice, and I would like to write a text for each verse, but I don’t like exaggerations. When I am thirsty, I will love in order to quench my thirst anyway.
I love this ♦️♦️♦️♦️
Beautifully expressed ☺
so relatable and so well written!
So very true Sid. I esp like 'hearing your voice before you ring'. It is a celestial connection.
Nice! Great metaphors and symbolism. Well written.
A very heartfelt poem! ''Seeing the sun in the middle of the night'' is my favorite lyric. ☀️
Seems to me like you've already learned to fly. ⚡💙⚡
Beautiful and uplifting words Sid, so happy to see the sun through your eyes. 🦋🐦💕
"Learning to fly with no wings" and "seeing the sun in the middle of the night" are such powerful expressions of hope and resilience. The shift to the more sensory descriptions of love as warmth and a cold drink is equally effective, grounding the abstract concept in tangible feelings. This is a truly lovely and inspiring piece.✨👍
Lovely love poem!!! Superbly penned!!!
Well done! Beautifully written!!!
Soft, warm, and comforting—like a hug in word form! Love feels like magic here, something beyond logic but completely real. Sweet and simple, just right!
That last line, that's such a wonderful feeling. Loved your poem!