Lessons Of the Hunt
And the Heart
All he wanted was to please his daddy
not sure what all hunting entailed
But, anything, to make daddy happy
that boy'd try it, twice, without fail
Where-ever he went, he had that savage rascal
a twenty two, that his grandpa gave
He'd play pretend, protecting dames and castles
until enemies surrendered, and white flags waved
He shot bottles, cans and hollow tree stumps
sat them up by threes, in a row
Out in the cold, until covered with goosebumps
a secret, cause he never told a soul
Now, mama warned daddy of the dangers
he answered, honey, it's time he learned
He bought passes that day, from the ranger
planning to hunt, soon as the weather turned
They stirred awake, wee hours in the morning
packed a lunch and headed out
He followed like a Boy Scout, stealthy
lifted to his eye to the barrel site
He scoured to the right, observing landscape
everything dad did, mimicked with pride
The practice helped, it fell into shape
he smiled at the smile in daddy's eyes
Daddy said, start small, we'll look for rabbits
you spot them, I'll take it from there
When he did, daddy took aim and shot it
the poor boy in shock, could only sit and stare
Blood dribbled down his soft, pink nose
his eyes welled, as he began to cry
Daddy kicked his toes, said boy, stop that noise
grumbled under his breath and then, he sighed
If we're doing this, you can't be whining
you've got that gun, it's time to be a man
Next rabbit we see, I want to see you trying
wipe those tears off your face, you understand?
He used his sleeve, and wiped snotty tears off
nodded his head, and furrowed his brow
He wanted to show daddy he could be tough
but the streaks on his face, said, he didn’t know how
One appeared, he pretended not to notice
rubbing his eyes, looking the other way
Daddy said gruffly, no hocus pocus
if you're playing games then, you can't stay
He raised his gun, aimed at his target
imagined a can, eased his fears away
Firing the gun, it’s body jumped a wee bit
he'd hit his mark, blood covered its face
Atta boy, he said, now go retrieve it
you’re a sure shot boy, just like your pops
He picked it up, and sniffled a bit
faked a grin, then, his heart and jaw dropped
Climbing the tree, behind where daddy sat waiting
a cougar creeping, slowly behind
Without thought, the boy raised his gun, shaking
his smile fell, at the barrel of his child
With one shot, the shell whizzed past his daddy
striking that cat, squarely, tween his eyes
When it hit the ground, daddy cried, his tears, happy
the skill of his shot, took him by surprise
When they'd settled down, daddy knelt before him
said, I’m sorry son, sometimes you must cry
He hugged him tightly, crying once again
you’re so brave little man, you saved my life
The boy, crying too, but this time, proud tears
daddy, if it's okay, I don't like to hunt
I might try again, maybe, in a few years
but right now, all I want are your hugs
They walked home, dragging that cat behind them
the sun at their backs, brand new lessons learned
No flower's the same, even off the same stem
The love you receive, should always be returned
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Comments (3)
A piece of magic, Kelli. A wonderful story told in poetry. Loved it !!!!!
Kelli I am stunned and in awe. This is a sweeping piece thats shows the fragility and delicateness of our bond with nature. Kudos!
Your story was such a great read! It actually sparked a few cool ideas that I think you’d really like. Want to hear what I came up with?