Left Feeling Salty
Exposed feelings leave to feelings of exposure
There was once a man who dated the sea
He courted her often upon his steed
Once he had her betrayed
She had him flayed
And that's the birth of the Nuckelavee
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Thavien Token's: This limerick has been crafted for Mother Combs' Limerick Challenge.
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I should have been born in Scotland. They have the best monsters there. I enjoyed learning about another one in the video, and I enjoyed the limerick. Well done, Thavien.
This is like the awesomest of the most awesome limericks! I came to know about Nuckalavee from Novel's story. Thanks for embedding that YouTube video! It's so weird for something so terrifying to be afraid of water.
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I love it when I'm reading for enjoyment and learn new things! I had never heard of a Nuckelavee. Thanks for sharing the link! This is a great limerick. I've never been any good at writing these and I admire your versatility!