Knotty Situations
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It was Midnight,
On a summer night,
You conversed with me outside on the back terrace,
We sat near the Pool,
Your questions lead to curiosity, and you continued to speak to me gently,
With a passionate vibe...
I was too nervous,
To even witness the signs.
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Ah the wonderful range of emotions and feelings when starting to like someone.
amazing to you.....
Intriguing and captivating!
It was midnight, we stood overlooking the Harbor β¦. Oh my Lonzo, you took me back to a moment. Thank you. ππ₯°
I love the way you expressed this truth of life! Well done on another fine and well deserved Top Story, Lonzo! Awesome work!
So true! Many times love can be missed if thoughts are elsewhere. Congratulations on your top story β€οΈ
What more is there to say? Succinct & to the point. Sometimes we just miss the cues.
Congrats, Lonzo! This was a poem full of promise. A delight to read!
Congratulations on another wonderful poem and a deserving Top Story, Lonzo!
Great choice for a top story. Well done!
Congratulations on Top Story! Beautiful work.
Congratulations on Top Story
Nice poem Congratulations on Top Story
Beautiful,Congratulations on Top Story
Gorgeous work my friend you have a gift! Congratulations π on top story
Congrats on TS! I love your poems! Youβre inspiring! π₯°
Beautiful, Lonzo! Congratulations on Top Story π
Well-deserved TS!
Amazing!
Great work, as always π₯°π₯°
Got all the feels from this one, Lonzo! π¦ππ«Congrats on top story!!
I love the simplicity of this one! Mutual attraction is so exciting we donβt always notice itβs mutual. Congrats on Top Story! π₯
Nice poem and congratulations on the Top Story!!!
Wow Lonzo, Congrats again ππππ
Congratulations on top story! ππ