Falling in Love on the Fourth ❤️F July
Just Like a Roman candle, my heart 💥 Exploded with Love 😍
Fireworks Decorated the sky...
Vigorously I Stood by your side.
Everyone else was So Loud,
But so were you and I...
Being met face to face, With our feet planted in the grass,
I think that is when I
Saw the twinkle in your eyes.
The first Time
For a long time, I had
Fallin in love
On the fourth of July...
Multiple colors
Burst with pride.
I envisioned
Your lips
Bussing mine,
As I closed my eyes.
That Night With A Colorful Sky,
I fell in love
On the fourth of July ✨
About the Creator
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (22)
May the beauty & joy of the fireworks never end for the two of you/them.
Nice❤️
This was so dope. Lived for it
Great poem, Lonzo!
Good stuff. Congrats on top story.
That was so heartwarming :) It felt deep, intimate, and special. Thank you for sharing with us
This one touched my heart in a special say! It is so heartwarmingly Beautiful & romantic! Wonderful work lil bro! BRAVO!!!!😍
This peice has a lovely rhythm to it ❤️
Beautiful! Definitely felt the fireworks in this one! 🤗❤️
It's all about love
Aww, this is so romantic. Beautiful piece.
So romantic, Love it 🥰
I love this, beautiful ❤️
very nice
So beautiful ❤️
Awww, this was so wonderful and romantic!
"Everyone else was So Loud, But so were you and I..." Oh, I loved this line. Gorgeous, gorgeous work. I loved this poem! 💗💓💕
You’re such a romantic! I love it.
<3 Such a sweet love poem. I really like it, Thank you, Handsome, for sharing this
Awwww!!! Super sweet and spectacular ❤️❤️💕
Love this - and that subtitle is 🔥
I love it! Great work! Hope you fall in love! 🥰