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Just One

if this were numbers it would barely add up to seventeen

By BrenPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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yeah

i know i shouldn't

we’ve all heard

that before

famous last words

an all that

nah

but i know

i'm gonna

best laid mice men

plans

an all that

yeah

i know i wanna

the intent is

literally bubbling

another fart

in another jacuzzi

an all that

nah

i suppose

pipers will be adequately

compensated

i haven't got a space suit

but i’m out there

an all that

yeah

nah

...

an all that

inevitable conclusions

will be drawn

immaculate concepts

imagined then born

and in that silly space

just before dawn

malleable moments

mutate and form

yeah nah

ok

maybe

just one

For FunStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • 𝐑𝐌𝐒about a year ago

    Stream of entertaining thoughts. Well done, Brenton!

  • Kristen Balyeatabout a year ago

    You are the king of stream of consciousness!

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    That was fun 😁 I feel like you could have entered quite a lot of your back catalogue, the flow often reads like a soc 😁

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Love this!!! Definitely a fun read!!!❤️❤️💕

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