there are not enough days
in just one life
to love you
the way i need to
not enough hours
minutes and seconds
no abstract concepts
that i have to heed to
i told you i would wait
just to see you again
even after forever
i will love you the same
i told you i'd be here for you;
after all this time
even after forever
what’s ours is yours is mine
you’re my lover
you’re my friend
you’re the dream
i don’t want to end
you fill my heart
you fill my soul
so it’s only fair
that you should know
i love you
like no other
i love you
oh so much
i love you
completely utterly
i love you
you’re nice to touch
you’re my beacon
my guiding light
with you i can see
in the darkest night
you’re my concrete
you’re my glue
there is nothing
i cannot do
i am so crazy damn
so crazy stuck on you
you are my everything
my night and my day
i love you madly
i'm glad to say
i will love you forever
that is a given
the emotion required
it’s all heart driven
you are my world
my beginning and my end
you are my wife
my lover my friend
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CDXCI
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Comments (7)
So sweet and expressive! Really beautiful job :)
Awww, this was so lovely and wonderful!
I love this a lot, so beautiful!
So dang lovely Brenton. What beautiful a life for you both🤍
Beautiful, beautiful & lovingi it!!!❤️❤️💕
just lovely. she must adore your poetry 🥰
Amazing ❤️❤️✨ you’re both lucky people!