Journey
Wonderland Poetry Prompt Challenge Day 7
The oracle didn't speak.
She just raised one eyebrow
and handed me a cracked mirror
so I would never see myself clearly.
I tucked a silent map
under my tongue
cartographed by things left unsaid.
The path was unclear.
The signs were written in a language
I'd invented at thirteen and immediately forgotten.
I fell in love with a ghost
and argued with the fickle wind
in a labyrinth they'd made of expectations.
They told me I was "almost there";
they meant emotionally codependent.
By the river I tried to barter with my past
The ferryman shrugged
"everyone does," he said.
I crossed anyway to find a barren land
with a single wilting flower
that looked suspiciously like me.
I knelt beside it,
watering her with my tears as
I bloodied my knuckles,
cracked them open from digging out
the roots of shame.
It didn't thank me.
But it stayed,
blooming gently, stubbornly.
And I think that means
I made it.
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Ellie Hoovs
Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.
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It's difficult for me to know where to start with a review of this book as it was, for me, an entirely unique experience and one that I'll probably never have again. I don't want that to be interpreted as unenjoyable but it has left me scratching my head a little and ruminating on its content, its themes and its characters.
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Here is my entry for the day 7 prompt. Sorry to blitz attack you with so many all at once, I was out of commission for almost two weeks. <3
Day 7 entry, thank you! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/the-compass-in-the-stone%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Amazing!
Finally: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/goodbye-farewell-adieu%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here is my take: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/hair-journey-vs4nx0vv1%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Definitely a more somber and haunting tone, but with a note of triumph at the end. A very fitting piece for such a word of inspiration!
This is very beautiful, Ellie. I like the part with the flower very much.
Here’s my entry for Day7: Journey https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/journey-g43m06dl%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I tried to barter with my past, I especially loved that.
Here is my Day 7 poem: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/life-is-a-journey-tread-it-wisely%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E 😊😊
Very nice, Ellie. Full of subtle but good analogies of life. Especially liked the lines: "They told me I was "almost there"; they meant emotionally codependent."
Another lovely and emotional poem, Ellie! Like Angie, I love the lines describing the "silent map." Here is my poem for today! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/journey-7r2fw0bph%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Lovely! I especially liked: “I tucked a silent map under my tongue cartographed by things left unsaid.”🩵 The Ferryman lines remind me of Chris de Burgh’s song “Don’t Pay the Ferryman”. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8kNwvIEQsg0
Well-wrought! The labyrinth of expectations... I think of it as a labyrinth of mirrors, and have often asked: When mirror regards mirror, which is the reflection?
This was like an Everyman parable but more lyrical.
Fantastic 😊
Fascinating!!!
Powerful. What a journey to find a new version of yourself.