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Goodbye, Farewell, Adieu

Journey: Wonderland Poetry Prompt Challenge Day 7

By Angie the Archivist šŸ“ššŸŖ¶Published 8 months ago • 1 min read
Goodbye, Farewell, Adieu
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Goodbye, Farewell, Adieu!

It’s been sure nice knowing you!

Wearing a smile

I’m leaving in style.

*

Butterflies flutter

I strive not to stutter…

Anxiously, I await my turn

A chance to learn…

*

If today Iā€˜ll embark on a journey

taking me far over land and sea.

Snug in the cockpit

I fit the headset.

*

A few quick instructions before

I hurtle off with a roar.

Wings waggle, wobble and wind

Playing terribly with my mind.

*

Fly under the bridge, up the valley.

Instructs a quiet voice beside me.

What valley? What bridge?

I feel disorientated, just a smidge.

*

Too late! I’m upon it.

Pull up, or you’ll hit!

Your speed is falling!

My plane’s almost stalling…

*

It veers into a spin

I suspect I won’t win

a career in the Army

after crashing into the sea!

*

My next effort fared no better

My ā€˜bobble-head’ chortled with chatter.

The plane spiralled into a spin

Sadly, my head joined in.

*

We crashed into the land

Uninjured, I barely could stand.

There was no need to say it

I ā€˜quit’!

*

Undaunted, I began a different journey

Just in time for school Cross Country.

Puffing and plodding around

A Jester, a capering clown.

*

Some journeys are strung out straight

Their destination, well worth the wait!

Others are shrouded in mystery

Ending, where I never imagined I’d be.

*

So enjoy life’s journey

Wherever it may lead

Through valleys, over peaks and by lakes

Press on, no matter what it takes.

*

Inspired by an exciting Flight Simulator experience, followed by a Cross Country Race (Oh wonderful day). Written for the prompt: Journey.

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About the Creator

Angie the Archivist šŸ“ššŸŖ¶

Labradorā€˜s personalityšŸ•ā€šŸ¦ŗā€¦ attention span of a gnat! šŸ™ƒ

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  • Ellie Hoovs8 months ago

    Great poem! I love how you make the point about not all paths are straight and go as planned.

  • D.K. Shepard8 months ago

    Such wonderful rhyme! This was quite the journey of a piece! A plane crash and everything!

  • Hehehe interesting ride 😊

  • That was one hell of a flight, lol. Loved your poem!

  • Calvin London8 months ago

    Loved it Angie, how was the run?

  • I love it. I love every word and your formatting style, including that strikethrough word. Good stuff! āš”šŸ’™āš”

  • Matthew J. Fromm8 months ago

    You don’t know how hard that final line hits right now haha

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