Goodbye, Farewell, Adieu
Journey: Wonderland Poetry Prompt Challenge Day 7
Goodbye, Farewell, Adieu!
Itās been sure nice knowing you!
Wearing a smile
Iām leaving in style.
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Butterflies flutter
I strive not to stutterā¦
Anxiously, I await my turn
A chance to learnā¦
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If today Iāll embark on a journey
taking me far over land and sea.
Snug in the cockpit
I fit the headset.
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A few quick instructions before
I hurtle off with a roar.
Wings waggle, wobble and wind
Playing terribly with my mind.
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Fly under the bridge, up the valley.
Instructs a quiet voice beside me.
What valley? What bridge?
I feel disorientated, just a smidge.
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Too late! Iām upon it.
Pull up, or youāll hit!
Your speed is falling!
My planeās almost stallingā¦
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It veers into a spin
I suspect I wonāt win
a career in the Army
after crashing into the sea!
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My next effort fared no better
My ābobble-headā chortled with chatter.
The plane spiralled into a spin
Sadly, my head joined in.
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We crashed into the land
Uninjured, I barely could stand.
There was no need to say it
I āquitā!
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Undaunted, I began a different journey
Just in time for school Cross Country.
Puffing and plodding around
A Jester, a capering clown.
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Some journeys are strung out straight
Their destination, well worth the wait!
Others are shrouded in mystery
Ending, where I never imagined Iād be.
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So enjoy lifeās journey
Wherever it may lead
Through valleys, over peaks and by lakes
Press on, no matter what it takes.
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Inspired by an exciting Flight Simulator experience, followed by a Cross Country Race (Oh wonderful day). Written for the prompt: Journey.
About the Creator
Angie the Archivist ššŖ¶
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Comments (7)
Great poem! I love how you make the point about not all paths are straight and go as planned.
Such wonderful rhyme! This was quite the journey of a piece! A plane crash and everything!
Hehehe interesting ride š
That was one hell of a flight, lol. Loved your poem!
Loved it Angie, how was the run?
I love it. I love every word and your formatting style, including that strikethrough word. Good stuff! ā”šā”
You donāt know how hard that final line hits right now haha